“The Greatest Invention” – By Evan, Gr. 4

November 27, 2008

Copied word-for-word from a rough copy I found in Evan’s backpack for school:

I think that the epi-pen is the greatest invention because without the epi-pen, some people might not be able to live.

The epi-pen affects my life because without the epi-pen, my sister might not be alive.  My parents would be affected because they might only have one dauhter.  Once my sister had a reaction and she didn’t have the epi-pen, when she got to the hospital her blood pressure was so low they had to put the I.V. in her foot.

Without the epi-pen I might not have a sister.  It would be very hard to live for some people.  Some people might only live to the age of three without the epi-pen.  The world population might only be almost 6 billion not almost 7 billion people.

I can improve the epi-pen by making no needle in the epi-pen.  Instead I would make it in bottles so that if you left it out in the cold you would still be able to use it.  Even if it was fifty below zero!

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One Response to ““The Greatest Invention” – By Evan, Gr. 4”

  1. Kate Says:

    Such a sweetheart. I wouldn’t ever (EVER) want to homeschool my kids, but I do envy the little glimpses of personality and home life that the teachers get, sometimes…


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